Akatsuki Returns: A Part III fan-fiction

[Webb]

thats quality, keep em coming PxK

[Possesd]

ZOMFG!!!! AWESOME !!!!
Keep it comin PxK!

[sackey485]

the wait is unbareable i need more

[zaraki kenpachi]

omgz where is it!

[PeinxKonan]

I'm back from my vacation! ^.^ I was in Washington DC, and it was insanely crowded, for those of you who wanna know.

Anyway, here comes chapter 6. for you impatient people *coughzarakicough*, it takes a while to type a chapter- 45 minutes to an hour. So give me time. xD

(08-14-2008 09:19 PM)
"Anyway, I said you were going down, so now you are. And I don't go back on my word. Cuz' that's my nindo...my ninja way!" The customer said, grinning. He put a hand in front of him, and a rasengan appeared.

"Wh-who the heck are you?!" The robber asked, body trembling.

"Heh. I'm the future Hokage, Uzumaki Naruto!" Naruto exclaimed, thrusting the rasengan into the robber's stomach, blasting the crook out of the building, through another building, and then a few feet in to the ground.

Naruto sipped on some more coffee, and looked to his left as a bunch of other ninja charged at him.

"....? You guys must be his assisstant. Sad that a ninja needs backup...." Naruto said, sidestepping as a huge rasengan formed. "....rather than work together." He finished, as he made a bunch of shadow clones with a one handed seal, and they all made huge rasengans. "TAKE THIS: THE ULTIMATE COMBO MOVE! NARUTO HURRICANE!!!" He shouted, as all of his clones smashed their blasts into the other ninjas. The clones dispersed, and Naruto turned to leave.

(with Sakura)

Sakura sighed. There was no luck with finding Naruto, and she was ready to give up. She turned when she heard screaming and saw a bunch of people running in the direction of the coffee shop.

"...? What's going on?" Sakura asked, running to some random people.

"I don't know! Let's get to the coffee shop and find out." One of them said, leading the group towards the shop.

Sakura stared at the shop, and gasped. The place was a mess- all of the walls were smashed up, and a ninja was stuck in the ground behind her. She walked to the shop owner, and frowned.

"What happened?" Sakura asked, frowning.

"It was amazing! Some guy tried to rob my store, and then some guy stood up and blew the robber up! Then, a bunch of reinforcements came, and he took them down like it was nothing!" The owner said, grinning.

"...Huh...Did the guy say what his name was?" Sakura asked.

"Uhh....I think it was....Uzumaki something. Naruto, that was it!" The man explained, after thinking for a moment.

"WHAT?! NARUTO WAS HERE?! WHICH WAY DID HE GO?!" Sakura shouted, eyes widening in excitement.

"....He went that way..." The man replied, pointing where Naruto had left.

"THANK YOU!!!" Sakura shouted again, running away.

".......Crap....I just realized I need to pay for the damages...o.o" The man muttered.

(with Sakura, again)

Sakura ran through the forest at top speed, looking for Naruto. Her eyes darted left and right. Naruto, where are you?! She thought, seeing a man appear in front of her with a straw hat on.

"EXCUSE ME!" Sakura said, stopping next to the man, and leaning over in exhaustion. "I'm....looking for someone....He's tall-ish, blonde, has blue eyes....is sort of an idiot..." She said, panting. "You seen-...." She began to say, as she looked up at the man in the hat.

The man looked down, and smiled. He was a tall-ish, blonde, blue eyed idiot. "Sakura-chan...." He whispered.

"...Naruto...." Sakura also whispered.

Naruto watched Sakura stand up straight, and raised an eyebrow. "...You're sweaty."

Sakura scowled, and slapped Naruto. "'YOU'RE SWEATY'?! WE HAVEN'T SEEN EACH OTHER IN FIVE YEARS, AND THE FIRST THING YOU SAY IS SOMETHING STUPID LIKE THAT?!"

Naruto frowned. Do'h! "Well...yeah...." He said, rubbing his cheek.

"Idiot...." Sakura whispered, as tears escaped her eyes. "Heh...I missed you..." She added, as she hugged Naruto.

Naruto smiled, and hugged Sakura in return. At least I got away with my stupid comment... "I missed you, too..."

(with Hawk)

Keiko sighed heavily as she stared at the sky. It was getting incredibly dark, and she was getting a headache for the same reason as Juugo- Karin and Suigetsu. Luckily, they had been quiet ever since Sasuke yelled at them a couple of hours ago. But she could sense that it was about to get bad.

"Hey, Karin, guess what?" Suigetsu asked, a grin growning.

"Oh crap...." Keiko whispered.

"...What?" Karin asked, thinning her eyes.

"Sasuke will neevvveeerrr love you...He has another Uchiha now, so you should just give up." Suigetsu said.

Juugo winced, and shut his eyes. Here it comes...She's gunna burst....

"....I know..." Karin whispered, looking away.

What? She DIDN'T burst? Wow....PEACE! Juugo thought, smiling.

"Aww, are you depressed now?" Suigetsu asked. "Poor Karin. She doesn't get the man of her dreams...." He added, grinning deeper.

Karin scowled at Suigetsu, and her lip quivered lightly.

"DON'T YOU THINK I KNOW THAT?! I'VE BEEN REJECTED AGAIN! I'VE ALWAYS BEEN REJECTED! I'VE BEEN REJECTED FROM MY FAMILY, FROM OROCHIMARU, AND FROM EVERY BOY I'VE EVER LIKED! YOU KNOW, I'M TIRED OF YOU RUBBING THAT DAMNED FACT IN MY FACE!" Karin shouted, as tears poured out of her eyes and she ran ahead of the rest of the group.

"...Wooooow, you made her cry..." Juugo muttered, turning to face Suigetsu.

"o.o I need to apologize now, don't I?" Suigetsu asked, eye twitching.

"Yeah." Keiko said.

"....****." Suigetsu muttered, slapping his forehead.

(with Sakura and Naruto, back in the hotel)

Naruto grinned. "So, fill me in on what's going on. Why are we headed for the Mist village, of all places?" He asked.

"You'll get more info when we get there, but a bunch of kids have gone missing." Gaara explained.

Naruto frowned, and started thinking. "Hmm...I think I heard about that..." He said.

"It doesn't matter. What I wanna know is, why were you in that city?" Sakura asked, a huge smile on her face.

"I don't know." Naruto said, shrugging. "I just...had a feeling. My mind told me to go there." He said, smiling lightly. "That's the only reason."

"Huh...Fate, I guess." Neji said. "Well, it's nice to have you back, Naruto. Pein had told us-"

"WHAT?! PEIN?! WHAT THE HELL, I KILLED HIM!" Naruto shouted, scowling.

"o.o Well, at least you're still the same ol' Naruto..." Neji muttered. "But yeah, Pein's alive."

Naruto cursed, and looked away. "We gotta take him down. We've got to." He said.

"After this mission." Sakura said. "This is more important."

"....I guess..." Naruto whispered, staring at the ground. "Damn....I failed again...."

After that, the room went silent. No one had anything they wanted to say. An hour later, everyone started to leave to go to bed for the night, to set off towards the Mist village the next day.

Sakura looked back at Naruto as she began to leave, and smiled. "It really is nice to have you back, Naruto. I honestly, truly missed you." She said, walking back towards him.

Naruto watched Sakura sit down next to him. "....Look...I'm sorry that I left-"

"Naruto, come on. No apologies." Sakura said. "I don't need one."

Naruto smiled, and stood up. "Are there any more beds that I can use?" He asked.

"Yeah, there's one right next to mine." Sakura said, also standing up.

"Thanks." Naruto said, walking away to go to bed. "Oh, and Sakura-chan...You're really beautiful now." He added, blushing.

Sakura went red, and stared at Naruto for a moment. "Uh....Thank you...." She whispered, watching Naruto leave. ....Heh...He's defenatly the same Naruto...He says the most awkward things at the weirdest times.... She thought, smiling lightly. But I wouldn't want it any other way...

[zaraki kenpachi]

omgz <3 it's great!!!! amazing!!!!!!

keep writting don't sleep xD

[Webb]

Originally Posted by zaraki kenpachi

omgz <3 it's great!!!! amazing!!!!!!

keep writting don't sleep xD

LOL i aggree must have more

[sackey485]

a A++ Chapter i need more

[PeinxKonan]

Well, here comes chapter 7! Again, give me an hour or so to type it up.

(08-15-2008 03:24 PM)
Suigetsu felt rather uneasy through out the next hour of walking- not because he was tired, but because he knew what he had to do sometime soon- apologize to Karin.

Sasuke stared ahead, and smiled. "Hey! That's the Mist Village gate up ahead!" He said, dashing ahead. "Let's go!"

Keiko nodded, and ran to catch up with Sasuke. She looked back, and saw that Suigetsu was still walking at a normal pace.

"Hurry up!" Keiko said, smiling.

"..." Suigetsu sighed, and picked up the pace. "Sasuke, do I really NEED to apologize to Karin? I mean, she knows I was just kidding..."

Sasuke grinned. "Nope, you have to. It's your duty as a man." He said, laughing.

Suigetsu scowled. "....Thanks a lot, pal..." He muttered.

Juugo kept a calm expression, but in his mind, he was laughing his butt off. When ever it was that Suigetsu would actually apologize, he wanted to be there. This day is starting to get better....

(with Naruto and co)

Naruto ran out of the hotel, and grinned. "OKAY! Let's go!" He said, stretching.

Sakura yawned, and rubbed her eyes. "Geez...You're always so darned loud...." She whispered.

"Heh, sorry! That's just how I am!" Naruto exclaimed, running in circles. "COME ON!"

Neji raised an eyebrow. "...How many cups of coffee did you have this morning?!" He asked.

"One, two, twelve! Does it matter? Each one with five scoops of sugar!" Naruto said, eye twitching.

Sakura smacked her forehead, and watched Gaara and the rest of the group come out of the hotel. "I need an asprin." She said.

"? Headache?" Gaara asked, reaching in to his pocket.

"Not yet. I'll have one later, tho'." Sakura muttered, taking the asprin from Gaara. "Thanks."

Naruto stared out at the path ahead of him, and frowned. Huh...I have a bad feeling about this.... He thought, eyes thinning.

"Guys. Keep on your guard." Naruto said, looking back at the group.

"What? Um....Okay...." Sakura replied. He went from hyper to serious...That's a bad sign....

(back with Hawk)

Sasuke frowned as he set his backpack down in a huge hotel room. The room was nice- it looked rather royal, with red rugs covering the snow-white carpet, and elaborate designs covering the walls. The ceiling had a number of chandillears (yah, that's probably spelled wrong), and countless lights everywhere.

But for some reason, Sasuke felted nervous. Maybe it was because the Konoha and Sand ninja were coming, but he couldn't be sure. Then again, he could sense the emotions of his teammates, and Suigetsu was incredibly nervous.

Suigetsu sighed, and stared at Juugo for a moment, who gave him a, 'go do it', nod. He sighed, and walked into the room Karin was in.

Karin was huddled up in a ball in one of the corners of the room, with all of the lights turned off. She sobbed, and tucked her head down towards her legs, letting her long red hair cover her identically-colored eyes. She sensed someone enter her room- it was Suigetsu. She didn't need to look- he had a particular liquid chakra that was unique to him.

"....What do you want..." Karin whispered, her voice almost unaudible. She rubbed her eyes, and looked up at Suigetsu. He looked...odd. Not like his normal cocky self.

Suigetsu frowned, and sat down next to Karin. "....Um....Well..." He said, looking away. This wasn't gunna be easy.

Karin stared at Suigetsu for a moment, and sighed. "...Look...when I was younger, I lived in the Rain village. I lived in a town where being different was almost illegal. I had parents, a brother, and a sister- which was normal for my town. Almost everyone had a boy, then a girl, then another girl for kids.

"Everyone looked alike. They all had brown hair, blue eyes, the guys were about 6 feet, the girls only 5 and a half feet when they were adults. It was how my clan was. However, when I was born, I had red hair- immediate discrimination against me. Not to mention, I was always sort of a tomboy- I enjoyed martial arts, and shunned the beauty stuff.

"That, of course, set me apart from everyone else, and when I was about 7, they kicked me out of the house, out of the town...and eventually, out of the village. I was crushed- how could they hate me like that? Anyway, after a while, Orochimaru found me. I had unique abilities, those like he had never seen before. I could sense chakra, AND I could heal people- a rare combination. It amazed Orochimaru, so he took me in.

"For a while, I was...happy! I had people there who accepted me BECAUSE I was different. But, then the experimentation began. I came to lose my normal healing abilities, and needed people to suck out my chakra so I could heal them- all because Orochimaru did random crap to me. I lost my healing abilities, and gained red eyes. Not very helpful.

"I guess losing the healing wasn't good in Orochimaru's eyes, so he put me in charge of his experiment prisons- in other words...kicked me out of the Sound village. That put me in a situation where I really didn't belong anywhere. Over the years, I gained the normal crushes on boys, but...none of them would ever like me in return. My only guess here is because of my personality- I'm, heh, sort of a loudmouth. An irritant- someone who didn't belong.

"Since you probably didn't listen, Suigetsu, I'll sum it up like this: My whole life, I've never been accepted...let alone liked. And defenatly not..." Karin explained, looking away. "not...um..."

"Defenatly not what?" Suigetsu asked, frowning.

"Defenatly not loved. By anyone- not now...not ever." Karin finished, looking away.

Suigetsu stared at Karin for a moment, and looked away. "...I'm sorry....." He whispered. "Sorry for everything I've done to you. And for everything that has happened to you." He explained.

Karin stared up at Suigetsu, and found herself blushing slightly. "Oh...Umm..." She muttered, staring at Suigetsu for a moment. "I forgive you." She finished, putting a hand out for Suigetsu to shake. "Friends?"

Suigetsu smiled, and shook Karin's hand- but went red when Karin hugged him, kissed his cheek, and walked away. Suigetsu froze, and stared at the wall with a shocked expression.

And he stayed that way for the rest of the night.

(with Juugo and Sasuke)

Juugo walked into the main room, and sat in a chair next to Sasuke.

Sasuke turned to Juugo, and smiled. "So, how was the show?" He asked.

Juugo grinned. "Oh, it was quite interesting. Suigetsu hasn't moved since Karin left." He said.

Sasuke chuckled. "Interesting. At least you enjoyed it." He said, staring out the window. Out of the corner of his eye, he saw a huge group of people, all with hoods, enter the same hotel he was in.

Led by a person who wasn't wearing a hood, with blonde hair and, as far as Sasuke could tell, blue eyes.

This...is about to get very...very interesting. Sasuke thought, smiling. Very interesting, indeed.

[Webb]

ROFLMAO!!!

Neji raised an eyebrow. "...How many cups of coffee did you have this morning?!" He asked.

"One, two, twelve! Does it matter? Each one with five scoops of sugar!" Naruto said, eye twitching.

Thats just epic!! I can soooo picture this moment lol