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Genine
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This is the vote that one. For those of you don’t care for this story I suggest you start voting.
Shadow Skill The Legend of Gau Chapter 5: In an instant Erin had vanish from sight. Joushiro’s eyes went wide and looked from side to side, “Where did he go, there wasn’t any trace of him..that wasn’t just a fast movement, he must of teleported. Joushiro’s train of thought was cut off when blood started to seep out from his shoulder and looked to it in shock and reached up to grab it. “When did he!!” Joushiro was gritting his teeth clutching his shoulder. Erin was standing behind Joushiro blood dripping from his sword and a grim look on his face, “I’m sorry you lost your family, but I say the truth when I tell you they were executed for a reason..” Joushiro growled in anger and turned his body sending his blade towards Erin. Erin looked up to see the giant figure mimicking Joushiro’s movements, the bulk elbow of the crystal formation came hurtling towards him. Erin jumped up and back using his foot to push off the avatar’s elbow escaping harm. Joushiro quickly followed with a strong swing from his sword, Erin met Joushiro’s blade with his own and their swords grinded against one another causing sparks to fly. They stared into each other’s eyes, Erin’s was that of a cold concentrated stare, while Joushiro showed nothing but anger and rage. Joushiro’s anger finally boiling over jumped backward from Erin and put his sword up slightly. It started to glow with a strong energy and the Avatar even started to glow. Erin raised an eyebrow keeping his guard up, but curious as to what Joushiro would attempt now. Erin thought it appropriate to finish what he was saying, “Your family tried to take over the Holy Land Joushiro…they were going to overthrow the monarchy..” Joushiro’s eyes went wide and his teeth grinded harder and he shouted in response, “YOU’RE A LIAR!! I’LL KILL YOU!!” His energy seemed to intensify and he brought his sword down from the air with his eyes closed and it seemed to focus until it slowly dimmed down and then slowly away. Then his eyes snapped open and he breathed out slowly. Erin could feel an uneasiness in the air and the whole crowd seemed to go mute. Elle Ragu and Gau both looked on in astonishment and Elle had a grin on her face, “This should be interesting Gau..” Gau looked on at his sister with not nearly as much certainty as she had, “but Elle should this really be allowed to go on Joushiro obviously is not clear minded..” Elle let out a sigh and shook her head, “Don’t you get it Gau..look at him, he is willing to die defending what he believes, he is protecting his honor, even if he is misguided that is a worthy trait..” Gau looked to Elle raising a brow, “What do you mean misguided? So..what Erin says is true?” Elle closed her eyes, “Years back a family from the swordsman homeland were calling themselves the true protectors of the Holy Land, they were one of the strongest families in the homeland. They started out slow but eventually they were making threats of invasion into the Holy Land to destroy the imposter protectors..I never thought it was true, but this just confirms it, they were wiped out by the Holy Lands best men for the sake of harmony and balance between the 3 great nations and the Holy Land..” Gau stood there with a look of shock, “What a horri..” Elle turned around slapping Gau, a stern look across her face, “If they hadn’t then everything would have been thrown into chaos..it was their duty, don’t be so soft Gau…” Gau looked at Elle with unsure and shocked eyes and he finally turned back to the arena. The ground below Joushiro had begun to crack and rise up into the air and he grinned. Joushiro threw his sword up into the air and his crystal avatar caught it and vanished in a split second. Joushiro disappeared as well, and Elle grinned. Erin opened his eyes wide in shock, “****..I didn’t even catch a glimpse of it..can someone from the homelands be this strong??” Erin thought, but he didn’t have much time for thinking. Within moments the crystal formation appeared in front of Erin advancing on him with incredible speed and the force of the avatar hitting him was so strong he was barely able to take it. He was able to hold his ground against the formation for a few moments before it became too much. The avatar struck at Erin’s gut making him cough out blood and the avatar continued to beat on Erin until delivering a final blow knocking him to the wall, cracking the wall with his body. Erin coughed up blood and his eyes shot up when he felt Joushiro’s presence again. Joushiro was spinning in mid air right above Erin, Joushiro steadily got faster and with all of his might he shouted out, “WRATH OF HEAVEN AND EARTH!” Joushiro hit the ground and a huge explosion of dirt and rubble flew everywhere and the ground was quaking. When all was said and done there was a good sized crater in the arena where Erin was standing. Both men on the ground, Joushiro on his stomach seemingly unconscious, Erin on his back in the same state. Erin’s eyes slowly peeked open and he started to grimace in pain, he slowly sat up grunting, each move was painful. After several moments Erin struggled to his feet, his legs shaking, barely able to stand. He nearly collapsed when he coughed up more blood. He looked down at Joushiro’s peaceful face, he wasn’t dead but unconscious. There was blood coming from his forehead and from his right leg, among many other places. Not only had his final attack damaged himself but Erin apparently launched his own final attack the instant before Joushiro’s attack landed. The crowd was cheering so loud, Elle was jumping up and down cheering at the good fight she just witness, but then the ground slowly went silent when a portal opened up above the arena. It was the queen of the Holy Land her calm eyes looking as everyone in the audience bowed and Erin even slowly knelt to his knees. “I’m sorry your majesty. I went too far, and mentioned affairs that had been deemed classified….”Erin hung his bloodied head down in shame. The Queen stood there in mid-air for several moments looking down, a light shined from her hand and came down enveloping Erin and Joushiro. “Erin Porumore..do not apologize you stood your ground against a foe who intended to kill you..you have done an honor in the name of the Holy Land.” Erin smiled at this as his wounds slowly healed. “Joushiro…What your family did, and what was done to resolve it was inexcusable, we of the Holy Land are not innocent of making error…I would ask you now to regain your families honor by joining the Royal Guard..” The entire crowd started to talk amongst themselves in shock at this, even Erin was surprised. Gau looked over to Elle, “I thought becoming a Royal Guard of the Holy Nation took years, even after being accepted..” Elle sighed a bit scratching the top of her head, “They are doing this to atone for their sins…” Gau looked on in understanding. Joushiro sat on his knees thinking, his finger digging in and grabbing at the dirt. His eyes welled with tears and part of him didn’t want to move on, but he looked up the Queen and smiled. Within the next moment Erin, the queen and Joushiro were gone. The announcer baffled was quick to try and keep the crowds attention “And our winner ERIN PROUDMORE OF THE HOLY NATION!!! Our next match will be Gau Ragu VS Yukou Renshin..” (11-12-2008 03:31 PM) Unfortunately I will no long be able to pursue a thread on this forum due to lack of time. I apologize to anyone reading my fanfics, I am willing to give out details to my Naruto and/or Bleach stories(How they were to end and any other detail you might be interested in) I'm sorry for the inconvenience. Last edited by KaizerDragoon; 11-12-2008 at 04:31 PM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost |
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Genine
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I think i owe it to all the people who reads my fanfics to explain how some of them will end. Naruto.....did not die, he stages his own death after Kaiser recieved an offer of partnership from the man named Gable, Naruto came up with the plan. He is the man who has been watching Kakashi and his Group. Kakashi dies against Gable but he succeeds in killing Gable.
The man chain up to the wall when Jishra and Madara were talking is Kaiser's father and Jishra's husband, his buster body technique overpowered his mind and he had become a mindless fighting machine. Jishra is Kaiser's mother and she eventually dies protecting Kaiser from Kaiser's father, Kaiser defeats and kills his own father. Kaiser is actually Naruto's pupil. A flashback will reveal j-man telling Naruto when he was younger about the buster body bloodline, so Naruto knew about Kaiser and took him as pupil. Xuji is actualy Nagato/Pein, after their fight Pein/ Nagato didn't die, he had amnesia, due to Naruto's heart he couldnt' finish Nagato, he took him into the village and made him a Anbu. The men that attacked Kakashi's group became Pein;s new bodies AFTER he regained his memory thanks to Madara.. Sasuke and Madara have a final showdown. Sasuke knowing Madara's weakness finally kills him with his own Sharingan, which he can activate, which momentarily grants him normal eyesight, until unactivated. Madara's weakness is linked to an ancient Uchiha artifact that Madara created. During their first battle Sasuke managed to discover this, but Madara escaped. Naruto appears after Kaiser is almost killed by Pein, Pein and Madara team up against Naruto, but due to Sasuke showing up the fight is evened. Sasuke faces Madara and Naruto faces a newly memorized* Pein/Nagato/Xuji. Naruto eventually defeats him once and for all, despite his blindness Naruto does well even taking siginificant damage he wins. Sasuke and Naruto have both won and they take Kakashi's body and the rest of the damaged team back to Konoha to bury Kakashi's, pay respects. Naruto will stand infront of Lee's grace and he will place a small plaque with one word on his grace, the plaque reads, "Friendship" Naruto finally returns to his home, standind infront of his own house his hokage cloak waving in the wind Sakura steps out looking down at him. Her eyes well up with tears and she walks towards him slowly. As tears stream down her face she piops a vein and punches Naruto as hard as she can, but he takes it and stands his ground and looks back up at her with his blind eyes, he tells her he is sorry and he takes her into his arms as she continues to cry. Little Jiraiya and Kushina run out to hug them both and Naruto smiles. Many years later it is Naruto's time to pass on the title of Hokage, however there are a few competitors for the position so a tournement is held to determine it. There are a few less known shinobi, but Kaiser and Konohamaru can be standing side by side as an older Naruto explains the tournement. The end.. Bleach the suprising student. Kaiser the student turns out to be a product of a strange relationship between an espada and a shinigami. However they both thought the child would be better off in Seretei. Kaiser is basically as viazard with the power to surpass maybe even Ichigo. A being known as the creator(the big eye begind aizen when he escapred setetei) a being who was the first hollow shows up and almost kills Ukitake and Ichigo holds this being off barely until Kaiser arrives, Kaiser loses at first but he hears the voice of his mother in his head, and rises from defeat Ichigo sacrifices himself to banish himself the creator to a different dimension. The Spirit King declares Ichigo a great Hero. Ichigo's father in full royal guard garb, and a bit older can be seen at Ichigo's supposed funeral. Orihime is seen with a small child with a similiar look to Ichigo standing at the funeral. Kaiser a bit older is seen placing a japanese rose petal at his grace. Byakuya is seen standing the distance with Rukia. Shadow Skill Gau faces against his father and wins, but then he faces his father's latest pupil and eventually wins, after a long arguous battle. There is more this this story but the end result is what is important.. |
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Genine
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Well folks this is the starts of an original fanfic and from now on it will only be original work.
Bad Calibur A dark wet night loom over a usually lively city. The streets and the rooftops had just been covered with a heavy rain, though the rain had died down a bit now. The shimmering light coming off the neon lights of the buildings seem to glow brighter in the rain and the light became distorted. A dark figure stood a top one of the tallest buildings in the city, his figure was obscure due to the cloak that clouded his figure. As the wind blew so did the cloak, the person underneath smiled as bit of hair became visible. The figure knelt down slightly their eyes seemed to peer down at a building in specific. The noisy calm that held the city seemed to break when the part of the building the figure was looking at exploded raging in fire. The figure's face curved into a smile and finally they took off the top of their cloak revealing a man with strange eyes. They seemed to glow a reddish/blue depending on what angle you were looking from. As the man stood to his feet he looked down at the blazing hole in front of him, "So..you finally came out of hiding.." Now standing in the hole of the building was another figure, the cloaked figured looked up slightly taking the other man atop of the building into view. The still cloaked figure grinned slightly, with little hesitation the cloaked figure jumped up into the air towards the man atop of the building. He was caught off guard at this but still he seemed to ready himself for whatever came at him. Right when the man was about to swing forward with his fist the cloak figure flew right past him, looking back at the man the figure's face cracked a grin. The man clamped his teeth together but his attention was brought back to his front when the security from the building started to shoot at him as if he was the criminal. "****..Not this time.." The man stood up straight and closed his eyes, the air around him seemed to slow to a crawl before he bolted after the other cloaked figure, the top of the building he left behind seemed to crack and then explode due to the man's exit. The other cloaked figure finally returned their view to right ahead of them but the figure stopped in mid-air. Their smile turned into a frown as the man they thought they left behind was standing right in front of them. The man had crossed his arms and gave the person a stern look, "Your not getting away this time..My name is Chris Drake..I think you know who I am.." The cloaked figure smiled and without aa word charged Chris and send out a fist straight at Chris' face. Chris barely came back in time to grab the stranger's wrist to stop the punch from going any further. the figure's head hung down concealing their identity, but Chris then spun around quickly sending a strong kick to the mid-section of the stranger, they doubled over a bit more, their mouths hanging open. The person's mouth suddennly curled into a grin and brought their head up sharply catching Chris off guard. Chris' balance was thrown off target and he was thrown back a couple feet. Chris aggrivated reached into the side of his cloak and pulled out his weapon of choice. Two blade with special grips and an odd shape came into view and Chris vaulted toward the figure in front of him and swung up high at the cloak person. They brought their head back, their face still with a painted grin on it. Chris gritted his teeth and brought the other blade forth seemingly out of no where. The other figure's grin broke as they somehow lost track of his other blade in that first swing. The person barely brought their head back in time, but the cloak concealing them was ripped off completely. There in the air another man stood there with something on one of his arms, obviously the object he stole from that building. Chris looked up, "Who are you?" The man smiled. he had raven black hair and his eyes looked almost as black as his hair, "Call me Ezy"Chris raised an eyebrow, "Ezy??" The man seemingly named Ezy smirked and closed his eyes shaking his head side to side, "Sorry, but I don't have time to waste on you.." Chris smiled at this, "Oh rea...."Chris' words were cut off and his eyes went wide as the man named Ezy was no longer in front of him. Chris's vision started to blurr, but he looked down there was a hilt sticking out of his stomach and he looked behind him to see the rather long sword sticking out the back of him, "Wha..whe...."Chris' conciousness faded and he started to fall, but Ezy caught him by the collar of his cloak. "Hold up..I need this back.."Ezy lifted him up and brutaly ripped the sword from Chris' chest and Ezy brought Chris up close, "You can go back and tell them..they are too late.." Ezy through Chris up slightly and then spin kicked Chris sending him vaulting through the air. He didn't even lose speed for what seemed like miles until Chris' body crashed harshly into a tall building, then he flew out the other side and started to fly towards the ground. Chri's body bounced off the ground when he finally hit it, blood instantly flooding the ground below. Chris' eyes slitted open and its almost as if he saw someone standing there with him, "What are you doing?" He heard a voice talking to him, but it seemed to echo, time around them had seemingly stopped. He was barely hanging onto his conciousness so he didn't know what was real or not. "What are you doing I said!" The voice repeated. "What do you mean?" Chris asked. "It was just one man..He was slow as hell..." The voice repeated. "Wh..Who are you?" Chris asked once again. "Your hopeless...I guess I will have to help you for now.." The figure above leaned down and when that happened Chris' world seemed to go dark. When he arose his eyes snapped open and he sat up immediately asessing where he was. He groaned when sharp pains overtook him. He looked down to see his wounds had been bandaged. "Be careful...You will open your wounds.."A woman's voice sounded in his head and he turned. "Who..are you?" He asked. She turned to him and giggled, "Really?? Guess you don't remember.." The door to the room slided open and a man in a sharp suite came walking into the room, "So your awake.."He said pushing up his glasses. "Commander Lyle..."Chris regarded the man with an almost immediate respect. The man named Commander Lyle smirked, "Yes Chris..so apprently you don't remember one of your collegeues from the school. Chris looked back at the girl, "who...?" She smiled and shook her head walking to him, her heels clicking on the floor, "The name is Jessica, Jessica Vine..Remember now?" Chris looked down and his memories were a bit clouded and he then shot back up, "Oh!! Where is he?!" Jessica and Lyle both looked at each other, "Who?? The man that got away?" Chris shook his head, "No! the man who brought me here!" Lyle raised an eyebrow and the glare on his glasses changed with his head movement. "Chris...there was no man, you arrived at the headquarters bleeding and almost dead...Furthermore the city you were sent to last night was wiped out..." Chris' eyes shot open and he looked to Lyle, "Wh..what?! How...??" Lyle turned and pushed the button on the tv in the medical room, "We are not sure..one of the cameras that actually survived the chaos caught something, we were hoping you might recognize it.." The camera displayed a large explosion illuminating a figure, but it was still a greatly clouded image, whatever it was it didn't look human.. Chris looked down, "I'm..not sure..I remember that man I was sent over and then he did this to me..after that I remember a man. He bent over to pick me up and I passed out..I think.." Lyle looked at Chris carefully, "I see..." Lyle turned and started to walk out of the door now. When the door slid close he brought up a tiny screen displaying the picture he just showed Chris, "Who are you...?" He said his eyes concentrating on the picture. (Hope you guys like the start..) |
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