God's Invasion (WARNING: MAJOR SPOILERS FOR NARUTO) - Page 21

Uchiha Madara · 07-22-2008, 11:59 PM

C H A P T E R 1 9

(Orochimaru's Hideout)

Random things were being sucked up by the portal.

"He did a poor job of cleaning up...But I'm sure he of all people would be the one to know how to get out of there..." Said Madara

"I'm still alive you fool" Said Sasuke.

"Oh? I had honestly thought you were dead..."

"Not dead...just blind. That damn snake took my eyes" responded SAsuke.

"Heh, I guess that figures. You do know that your just gonna get sucked into the portal along with everything else right?" Said Madara.

"I can feel a pull, but I didn't know...Where does the portal lead to?" asked Sasuke.

"The summoning world...Orochimaru has turned himself into a summoning..."

"Wh-What!? How is that even possible?!" said the blind Sasuke.

"Honestly, I don't even know...I'm pretty sure he has some last servant out there wondering with the scroll to summon him..."

"But why? Why would he make himself into a summoning?" said Sasuke who began to pace around feeling for objects.

"Because now, he is truely immortal. There is only one person who's ever killed a summoning, and I believe he'll be the first to also kill a tailed beast..." Said Madara

(Deidara and Snake Sasuke)

"GAHHH!!! AHHH!!!!" Sasuke went down on one knee his hands on his eyes.

"What's the matter hmm?? Got some dust in your eyes?" said Deidara.

"Shut it!...DAMN IT! I lost my eyes! What the hell!?"

(With Pein)

"Something in common...SOmething in common...Damn that guy...Always making people think...All powerful...But what would he do with that? Put everyone against each other? No, if he showed himself infront of thoes other zombie members, he wouldn't have time to say anything...It's gotta be something simple...Maybe obvious...What's obvious about us....CLOAKS!! We all have cloaks!...But, no...he would want me to think that so that i get all caught up in that one thing while something else is happening! THAT is Madara!" Pein sat down and but his hand to is head. "Oh My God! That's It!!"

(Orochimaru's HQ)

"I know that he's facing the snake me...but he wouldn't be able to beat me now if he couldn't beat me then." said Sasuke.

"True...But last time you and I escaped only at the very last second. And with that snake in your body, I don;t think it knows how to get out..." Said Madara.

"What reason does Deidara there have to blow himself up again? f I understand this correctly, he shouldn't have any eyes now that mine were removed" Stated the blind

"This is true...But you see...If he is on the verge of death, or IS dying why not? You see it's for this exact reason that I distributed thoes rings." Madara took out a ring from his pocket. The one he had from Sasori wouldn't work. He crushed the ring in his hand the the dust on the floor sparked into a flame then died away.

"I don't see what that's going to do to me...i lose my ring a while ago..." said Sasuke.

"Who said it was for you...?"

(Juugo,Suigestu,Garra and Co)

"Hey,you think we should put al things of the Akatsuki behind?" Asked Suigetsu.

"We might as well...They kinda kried to kill us..." said Juugo.

"Well that was Sasuke...Who i guess is part of the Akatsuki alright well I don;t know about you but him gettin rid of my ring..." Sauigetsu took of his ring and threw it into the air. The ring then exploded in mid air. All stared in amazement. "QUICK! Take yours off!" Juugo did as he was told and chucked it. It also exploded.

"What the hell is going on!?" said Juugo.

(Other Ex-Akatsuki Members)

They were planning an attack on Madara to end this war, but Madara had planned ahead. The extra ring that Sasori was wearing burst into flames and set his puppet boddy a flame.

"WHAT!? Sasori! How'd that happ-GAHH!! P-Poison..." Kakuzu fell to the floor with his 5 hearts poisoned and slowly stopping.

"No...How is this Happening!?" Said Hidan.

"THE RINGS! It must be the rings!!" Kisame and Hidan furiously tried to remove the rungs but they had fastened themselves to their fingers. "DAMN IT!!!" shouted Kisame.

There was a quiet boo, and Hidans chect expanded and contracted, he then spit up blood, and alot of it. ".....AH...There goes my heat...." he said as he collapsed.

"No...all of them...just gone like that...All the rings were made individually...Just for everyones individual weakness...SO THEN MADARA! WHAT DO YOU HAVE FOR ME!!??....!!!!" Kisame breathed out and could see his breath and he grabbed his chest. His body was rapidly freezing. "Damn....YOu..." He said as he hit the floor dead.

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I thought that one was a little better...I kinda felt like Kira in this one ^^, but as an Akatsuki fan it still pained me do exicute such actions...Nonetheless it was fun :P

Possesd · 07-23-2008, 05:45 PM

I got a lil confused the first time i read it lol but after the second time i read it it made sense to me lol xD
Good work and keep it comin

Uchiha Madara · 07-23-2008, 11:10 PM

Not too many comments on this chapter...Oh well...The story must go on! -begins typing up the dramatic chapter 20-

sakura · 07-23-2008, 11:31 PM

great chapter!! can't wait for the next!!^^ pleeaaasssseee post it soon!!!

KazariUchiha · 07-24-2008, 02:56 AM

LOVE IT!!

heh heh.

super awesome!!
can't wait for the next chapter[s].

keep it up!

zaraki kenpachi · 07-24-2008, 07:38 PM

too much confusing :\ I'm kinda starting to lose interest in this...

but well keep up the good work.

(07-30-2008 06:15 PM)
where are the other chapters?????

please don't stop because I said that, continue posting chapters please!

Possesd · 07-31-2008, 12:16 AM

we need our fix man .... *Twitch's* Cmon man *jks jks*

But seriously don't stop because of what zaraki said xD

Uchiha Madara · 08-10-2008, 03:36 PM

Alright, Madara is back from the grave! Don't you worry, because in a matter of minutes, chapter twenty of God's Invasion will be up.

zaraki kenpachi · 08-10-2008, 03:49 PM

great.

so uhh where is it?

Uchiha Madara · 08-10-2008, 04:37 PM

C H A P T E R 2 0

(With Madara and Saskue)

"What was that? What did you just do?" asked Saskue.

"Killed all the remaining Akatsuki members, why do you ask?" Madara said nonchalantly.

"WHAT!? Thoes people who worked for you!? You just got rid of them!? Why?!?" shouted Sasuke

"Well, you see, me being the current god of this world means that I have to take charge and get rid of those who I deem as "trouble makers" responded Madara.

" 'Trouble makers'? You mean people that would stand in your way. Basically you just got rid of the competition..." said Saskue.

"You were always such a smart kid, so yes, you are correct, I did get rid of the competition. Anyone that could even have a chance of over throwing me is now gone! Hahaa!" said Madara.

"Or so you think..." Saskue said with a grin on his face.

"HA! Don't tell me YOUR going to stop me! Don't make me laugh!"

"No, I know that I'm out of the picture...But there are still people out there that can take you down, no problem. I'm not sure if you quite remember, but there is a crazy blond out there named Naruto Uzumaki...And all the other Konoha ninja! And I'm pretty sure that you forgot about all the ANBU level ninja that are still left in whats left of that village..."

"Don't kid yourself, all thoes jounnin are dead. It was confirmed." said Madara

"That's what you think! The Hokage gave her life to make sure that they all stayed safe and out of your devilish grip. Your not a god, your far from it. You can and WILL be taken down, i guarntee it..."

(With Deidara and Hatchibi Sasuke)

"GAAAHH!!!! What the hell!? My arm is turning to stone!!!" shouted Deidara.

"HA! Look whos having theproblems now!"

"Sh*t...This must be Madara's doing...I can only hope he Dosen't want my body for anything..." said Deidara.

"Hmm? What are you taking about?" said the Hatchibi.

Deidara threw off his Akatsuki cloak and shirt, and unstiched the monster mouth on his chest. He then empied all his clay out onto his one working hand.

"What do you think your doing!? You wouldn't possibly consider doing THAT again!?"

Deidara put the mound of clay into the mouth on his chest. "No, not at all...i just haven't fed this mouth in a while...YES YOU MORON!! This one is gonna be large...big...huge...nothing like it...with all this clay I'll be blowing up...ha...everything...this is the end of the world! This really isn't like me..." Deidara's body started to form into the bomb. "But, this could be for the better...Whiping this planet clean. The villages will be gone...Most of the people...But you see! The people that do survive can get back together! And rebuild the world!" He was about three fourths of the way into his bomb form. "And Madara thought that he was god...HAHAHAHAA! He's not the one preforming genocide on his own species!!!!!"

The Hatchibi started running but didn't get far considering his blindness. "YOUR INSANE!!! YOU CAN'T DESTROY THE WORLD!!! IMPOSSIBLE!!!! Your bluffing! i know it! You must be! No one has this kid of power! Your po-

"I CAN DO WHAT EVER I WANT!!!" Deidara said, cutting off the tailed beast. "I CAN END IT! THE WHOLE OF EVERYTHING!! WHY!?!?!? Well..there is of course ony one reason...Because...A R T I S A B L A S T!!!!!!!!!!" Deidara shouted as and explosion erupted from where he was, incinerating the hatchibi and leveling everything. The explosion was seen by everyone and everything. Every corner of the earth was illuminated.

(Konoha)

"WOAH! What was that!?" said Naruto.

"...Oh no..." Said Kakashi. The explosion was in the shape of a dove.

"What's wrong Kakashi-Sensai?" askd Sakura.

"Everything...EVERYONE!" shouted Kakashi. "THAT Explosion will be here in a matter of minutes. We'll only be safe if we get underground..."

"There a place under the mountain!" said Neji.

"No...too far...We Won't make it...EVERYONE HOLD YOUR BREATH ITS HERE!!!" Kakashi made a lot of hand signs and fast " Doton: Yomi Numa!!!! (Earth Release: Swamp Of The Underworld)" Everyone was sucked underground and held there.

(With Suigetsu, Juugo, Gaara.)

"Uh Gaara..." Said Temari

"Oh no...I don't know if I can get everone underground in time..."Said Gaara.

"Your goinna have to! That thing will destroy anything it comes in contact with..." said Kankuro.

Gaara began concentrating and sand came up from the ground and grabbed everyones ankles and began to pull them underground. He brought down Suigetsu, Juugo, Temari, and Kankuro first then started trying to get the rest of his army down...

(With Pein)

"So...he got Deidara to end the world eh?....Crap..." Pein turned around from where he was heading and sprinted the other way, then jummped way into the air, the dove into the ground like it was water.

(Saskue and Madara)

Orochimarus hide out rumbled a little bit. Some things fell of shelves.

"Mission accomplished..." Said Madara. "It was nice working with you Sasuke..."

"Damn you..." Pieces of Saskue began to fall off and turn to dust. "...you...wont win...." Saskue said as the rest of him collapsed.

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SO yeah...that was chapter 20...i dont know what to say about it. i dont know if it was good or bad or anything...i'll know what to change up once i get what you persons thought of it...

07-22-2008, 11:59 PM	#201 (permalink)
Uchiha Madara Noveno Espada Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: In A pArAdOx Posts: 5,735	C H A P T E R 1 9 (Orochimaru's Hideout) Random things were being sucked up by the portal. "He did a poor job of cleaning up...But I'm sure he of all people would be the one to know how to get out of there..." Said Madara "I'm still alive you fool" Said Sasuke. "Oh? I had honestly thought you were dead..." "Not dead...just blind. That damn snake took my eyes" responded SAsuke. "Heh, I guess that figures. You do know that your just gonna get sucked into the portal along with everything else right?" Said Madara. "I can feel a pull, but I didn't know...Where does the portal lead to?" asked Sasuke. "The summoning world...Orochimaru has turned himself into a summoning..." "Wh-What!? How is that even possible?!" said the blind Sasuke. "Honestly, I don't even know...I'm pretty sure he has some last servant out there wondering with the scroll to summon him..." "But why? Why would he make himself into a summoning?" said Sasuke who began to pace around feeling for objects. "Because now, he is truely immortal. There is only one person who's ever killed a summoning, and I believe he'll be the first to also kill a tailed beast..." Said Madara (Deidara and Snake Sasuke) "GAHHH!!! AHHH!!!!" Sasuke went down on one knee his hands on his eyes. "What's the matter hmm?? Got some dust in your eyes?" said Deidara. "Shut it!...DAMN IT! I lost my eyes! What the hell!?" (With Pein) "Something in common...SOmething in common...Damn that guy...Always making people think...All powerful...But what would he do with that? Put everyone against each other? No, if he showed himself infront of thoes other zombie members, he wouldn't have time to say anything...It's gotta be something simple...Maybe obvious...What's obvious about us....CLOAKS!! We all have cloaks!...But, no...he would want me to think that so that i get all caught up in that one thing while something else is happening! THAT is Madara!" Pein sat down and but his hand to is head. "Oh My God! That's It!!" (Orochimaru's HQ) "I know that he's facing the snake me...but he wouldn't be able to beat me now if he couldn't beat me then." said Sasuke. "True...But last time you and I escaped only at the very last second. And with that snake in your body, I don;t think it knows how to get out..." Said Madara. "What reason does Deidara there have to blow himself up again? f I understand this correctly, he shouldn't have any eyes now that mine were removed" Stated the blind "This is true...But you see...If he is on the verge of death, or IS dying why not? You see it's for this exact reason that I distributed thoes rings." Madara took out a ring from his pocket. The one he had from Sasori wouldn't work. He crushed the ring in his hand the the dust on the floor sparked into a flame then died away. "I don't see what that's going to do to me...i lose my ring a while ago..." said Sasuke. "Who said it was for you...?" (Juugo,Suigestu,Garra and Co) "Hey,you think we should put al things of the Akatsuki behind?" Asked Suigetsu. "We might as well...They kinda kried to kill us..." said Juugo. "Well that was Sasuke...Who i guess is part of the Akatsuki alright well I don;t know about you but him gettin rid of my ring..." Sauigetsu took of his ring and threw it into the air. The ring then exploded in mid air. All stared in amazement. "QUICK! Take yours off!" Juugo did as he was told and chucked it. It also exploded. "What the hell is going on!?" said Juugo. (Other Ex-Akatsuki Members) They were planning an attack on Madara to end this war, but Madara had planned ahead. The extra ring that Sasori was wearing burst into flames and set his puppet boddy a flame. "WHAT!? Sasori! How'd that happ-GAHH!! P-Poison..." Kakuzu fell to the floor with his 5 hearts poisoned and slowly stopping. "No...How is this Happening!?" Said Hidan. "THE RINGS! It must be the rings!!" Kisame and Hidan furiously tried to remove the rungs but they had fastened themselves to their fingers. "DAMN IT!!!" shouted Kisame. There was a quiet boo, and Hidans chect expanded and contracted, he then spit up blood, and alot of it. ".....AH...There goes my heat...." he said as he collapsed. "No...all of them...just gone like that...All the rings were made individually...Just for everyones individual weakness...SO THEN MADARA! WHAT DO YOU HAVE FOR ME!!??....!!!!" Kisame breathed out and could see his breath and he grabbed his chest. His body was rapidly freezing. "Damn....YOu..." He said as he hit the floor dead. --------------------------------------------------------------- *E N D* I thought that one was a little better...I kinda felt like Kira in this one ^^, but as an Akatsuki fan it still pained me do exicute such actions...Nonetheless it was fun :P __________________ Chapter 25 God's Invasion ~ The Company Front Gracias Dark!

07-23-2008, 05:45 PM	#202 (permalink)
Possesd Close Observationist Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Closely Observing You From The Bushes... Posts: 1,122 Blog Entries: 4	I got a lil confused the first time i read it lol but after the second time i read it it made sense to me lol xD Good work and keep it comin __________________ (Was not made by me)

07-23-2008, 11:10 PM	#203 (permalink)
Uchiha Madara Noveno Espada Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: In A pArAdOx Posts: 5,735	Not too many comments on this chapter...Oh well...The story must go on! -begins typing up the dramatic chapter 20- __________________ Chapter 25 God's Invasion ~ The Company Front Gracias Dark!

07-23-2008, 11:31 PM	#204 (permalink)
sakura Academy Student Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Forest of Death (taking the Chunin exam) Posts: 170	great chapter!! can't wait for the next!!^^ pleeaaasssseee post it soon!!! __________________ those feelings...those wishes...have without fail...made it our fate to meet once again. Thanks for the sig Possesd!!!

07-24-2008, 02:56 AM	#205 (permalink)
KazariUchiha Academy Student Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Leaf Village. Posts: 135	LOVE IT!! heh heh. super awesome!! can't wait for the next chapter[s]. keep it up! __________________

07-24-2008, 07:38 PM	#206 (permalink)
zaraki kenpachi smexy Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: hmm, next to you, but in a higher plane xD Posts: 3,928	too much confusing :\ I'm kinda starting to lose interest in this... but well keep up the good work. (07-30-2008 06:15 PM) where are the other chapters????? please don't stop because I said that, continue posting chapters please! __________________ Thanks for the sig most ^_^ 2500th post @ 24/06/2008 @ between 00.00 and 1.00am. 3000th Post @ 16/07/2008 @ 12:39 PM 3500th post @ sometime this month =p Last edited by zaraki kenpachi; 07-30-2008 at 07:15 PM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

07-31-2008, 12:16 AM	#207 (permalink)
Possesd Close Observationist Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Closely Observing You From The Bushes... Posts: 1,122 Blog Entries: 4	we need our fix man .... Twitch's Cmon man jks jks But seriously don't stop because of what zaraki said xD __________________ (Was not made by me)

08-10-2008, 03:36 PM	#208 (permalink)
Uchiha Madara Noveno Espada Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: In A pArAdOx Posts: 5,735	Alright, Madara is back from the grave! Don't you worry, because in a matter of minutes, chapter twenty of God's Invasion will be up. __________________ Chapter 25 God's Invasion ~ The Company Front Gracias Dark!

08-10-2008, 03:49 PM	#209 (permalink)
zaraki kenpachi smexy Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: hmm, next to you, but in a higher plane xD Posts: 3,928	great. so uhh where is it? __________________ Thanks for the sig most ^_^ 2500th post @ 24/06/2008 @ between 00.00 and 1.00am. 3000th Post @ 16/07/2008 @ 12:39 PM 3500th post @ sometime this month =p

08-10-2008, 04:37 PM	#210 (permalink)
Uchiha Madara Noveno Espada Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: In A pArAdOx Posts: 5,735	C H A P T E R 2 0 (With Madara and Saskue) "What was that? What did you just do?" asked Saskue. "Killed all the remaining Akatsuki members, why do you ask?" Madara said nonchalantly. "WHAT!? Thoes people who worked for you!? You just got rid of them!? Why?!?" shouted Sasuke "Well, you see, me being the current god of this world means that I have to take charge and get rid of those who I deem as "trouble makers" responded Madara. " 'Trouble makers'? You mean people that would stand in your way. Basically you just got rid of the competition..." said Saskue. "You were always such a smart kid, so yes, you are correct, I did get rid of the competition. Anyone that could even have a chance of over throwing me is now gone! Hahaa!" said Madara. "Or so you think..." Saskue said with a grin on his face. "HA! Don't tell me YOUR going to stop me! Don't make me laugh!" "No, I know that I'm out of the picture...But there are still people out there that can take you down, no problem. I'm not sure if you quite remember, but there is a crazy blond out there named Naruto Uzumaki...And all the other Konoha ninja! And I'm pretty sure that you forgot about all the ANBU level ninja that are still left in whats left of that village..." "Don't kid yourself, all thoes jounnin are dead. It was confirmed." said Madara "That's what you think! The Hokage gave her life to make sure that they all stayed safe and out of your devilish grip. Your not a god, your far from it. You can and WILL be taken down, i guarntee it..." (With Deidara and Hatchibi Sasuke) "GAAAHH!!!! What the hell!? My arm is turning to stone!!!" shouted Deidara. "HA! Look whos having theproblems now!" "Sh*t...This must be Madara's doing...I can only hope he Dosen't want my body for anything..." said Deidara. "Hmm? What are you taking about?" said the Hatchibi. Deidara threw off his Akatsuki cloak and shirt, and unstiched the monster mouth on his chest. He then empied all his clay out onto his one working hand. "What do you think your doing!? You wouldn't possibly consider doing THAT again!?" Deidara put the mound of clay into the mouth on his chest. "No, not at all...i just haven't fed this mouth in a while...YES YOU MORON!! This one is gonna be large...big...huge...nothing like it...with all this clay I'll be blowing up...ha...everything...this is the end of the world! This really isn't like me..." Deidara's body started to form into the bomb. "But, this could be for the better...Whiping this planet clean. The villages will be gone...Most of the people...But you see! The people that do survive can get back together! And rebuild the world!" He was about three fourths of the way into his bomb form. "And Madara thought that he was god...HAHAHAHAA! He's not the one preforming genocide on his own species!!!!!" The Hatchibi started running but didn't get far considering his blindness. "YOUR INSANE!!! YOU CAN'T DESTROY THE WORLD!!! IMPOSSIBLE!!!! Your bluffing! i know it! You must be! No one has this kid of power! Your po- "I CAN DO WHAT EVER I WANT!!!" Deidara said, cutting off the tailed beast. "I CAN END IT! THE WHOLE OF EVERYTHING!! WHY!?!?!? Well..there is of course ony one reason...Because...A R T I S A B L A S T!!!!!!!!!!" Deidara shouted as and explosion erupted from where he was, incinerating the hatchibi and leveling everything. The explosion was seen by everyone and everything. Every corner of the earth was illuminated. (Konoha) "WOAH! What was that!?" said Naruto. "...Oh no..." Said Kakashi. The explosion was in the shape of a dove. "What's wrong Kakashi-Sensai?" askd Sakura. "Everything...EVERYONE!" shouted Kakashi. "THAT Explosion will be here in a matter of minutes. We'll only be safe if we get underground..." "There a place under the mountain!" said Neji. "No...too far...We Won't make it...EVERYONE HOLD YOUR BREATH ITS HERE!!!" Kakashi made a lot of hand signs and fast " Doton: Yomi Numa!!!! (Earth Release: Swamp Of The Underworld)" Everyone was sucked underground and held there. (With Suigetsu, Juugo, Gaara.) "Uh Gaara..." Said Temari "Oh no...I don't know if I can get everone underground in time..."Said Gaara. "Your goinna have to! That thing will destroy anything it comes in contact with..." said Kankuro. Gaara began concentrating and sand came up from the ground and grabbed everyones ankles and began to pull them underground. He brought down Suigetsu, Juugo, Temari, and Kankuro first then started trying to get the rest of his army down... (With Pein) "So...he got Deidara to end the world eh?....Crap..." Pein turned around from where he was heading and sprinted the other way, then jummped way into the air, the dove into the ground like it was water. (Saskue and Madara) Orochimarus hide out rumbled a little bit. Some things fell of shelves. "Mission accomplished..." Said Madara. "It was nice working with you Sasuke..." "Damn you..." Pieces of Saskue began to fall off and turn to dust. "...you...wont win...." Saskue said as the rest of him collapsed. ----------------e n d------------------ SO yeah...that was chapter 20...i dont know what to say about it. i dont know if it was good or bad or anything...i'll know what to change up once i get what you persons thought of it... __________________ Chapter 25 God's Invasion ~ The Company Front Gracias Dark!

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