God's Invasion (WARNING: MAJOR SPOILERS FOR NARUTO)

[PeinxKonan]

lol, here's chapter one of my first Naruto fan-fic... (You'll understand the title later) HAVE TO HAVE READ UP TO CHAPTER 405 OR WHATEVER CHAPTER WE'RE ON. OTHERWISE, YOU WILL BE MAJORLY SPOILED.

Chapter One:


Naruto's eyes flew open- darkness. He blinked twice, and his eyes darted around the room- he wasn't at home. In fact, he didn't know where he was- all he could see were wavy walls, dim, blinking light fixtures hanging off of them. He blinked again, and tried to sit up- but he yelled out in pain as his right arm began to burn. He looked down, and began panicking- his arm was completly fried.
What...the heck...?! He thought, frowning. He turned left, and noted an interesting structure- bars. Black steel bars, going vertically 12 feet into the air. That's when he figured out where he was- a jail cell. Why am I in jail...? No, better question is...when did I get here?


He looked down, and realized he was on a bunkbed- he strained to look to see who was under him. Shikamaru...? Why's he here?
"Hey, Shikamaru! What the heck happened?"

Shikamaru looked up, and sighed in relief. "Thank god, you ARE alive..." He said, sitting up straight in his bed. "What, you can't remember what happened...? Then again, you WERE hit pretty hard on the head..."

"Hey, don't beat around the bush! What happened?!" Naruto asked, raising an eyebrow.

"Well...Last night, at about 11 pm, your pal Sasuke, Akatsuki, and the Rock, Rain, Mist, and what's left of the Sound village all attacked us at once. We fought for a few hours, especially you, but...y'know, it was four villages attacking us at once. The Leaf village has been completely taken over. And Sasuke is currently acting as leader."

Naruto froze in place. "S-Sasuke...led an attack on us?" ****! It was just like Itachi warned me...!
"Yup. And he had us all placed in jail cells with anti-chakra devices strapped to our chests. In essance, we have no weapons, no chakra, and we don't even know where this jail is. We could be anywhere from Konoha to the Sound Village." Shikamaru explained, pointing to the next cell over. Neji and Kiba were in there.

Neji scowled, and tried to activate his byakugan- but it failed. "Even the slightest bit of chakra is sucked up the second it's used. Even my byakugan, which uses so little chakra that the chakra use is almost non-existant, won't work."

Naruto shuddered, and looked around slowly. "Wait...all I see are us guys... where are the girls?" He asked.

"Well, it would be odd to put the guys with the girls." Shikamaru said, rolling his eyes. "C'mon, you're the biggest perv of us all, Naruto....You should know that."

Naruto frowned. "...Where's Sai?"

(In the cells on the other side of the jail)

Tenten shivered. "Great. We can't get out of here, our chakra is useless, we're seperated from the guys and we're stuck with Mr. Emotionless over there!" She said, smacking her forehead. "WHAT NOW?!"

"...Hey, Ugly, can you be quiet?" Sai asked, sort of politely.

"-.- Why were you put in here?" Tenten asked, looking towards Sakura. "Hey, are you okay...?"

Sakura, was curled up in a ball, tears streaming out of her eyes. "..." Sasuke...why would you attack the village...? And more importantly...Naruto....are you okay....?

(In the Sand Village)

"Ehh, Kazekage-sama. We have some bad news for you." A sand villager said.

Gaara closed his eyes, and sighed. "Well then, lay it on me."

"Umm...Konoha was attacked last night...and was practically destroyed."

"...!!"

(I'll continue this if you guys liked it. This isn't my prediction for the future, btw)

[sakura]

Ooohhh, what's going to happen?! Really good start! If you post anymore, i'll stick around to 'em (after i get back) Cantt wait to see where this is going!!! Keep posting!

[PeinxKonan]

Originally Posted by sakura

Ooohhh, what's going to happen?! Really good start! If you post anymore, i'll stick around to 'em (after i get back) Cantt wait to see where this is going!!! Keep posting!

i'll post the next chapter tomorrow. btw, where r u going, and when will you be back?

[SukiAmaya]

Ooh I like it!!!!!!!! Good job Yo-yo! *huggles* ^^

Hmm...will Gaara be able to help? What will Sasuke do next? Is Tsunade dead? The suspense continues...dun dun dun, lol.

[PeinxKonan]

well, i've got time, i'll post chapter...TWO!

(06-22-2008 09:02 PM)
Gaara's eyes thinned, and he slammed his fists onto the table in front of him. "WHAT?! WHO ATTACKED KONOHA?!" He roared, voice trembling in pure anger.

"U-umm, well, a bunch of villages, and uh...Akatsuki..."

"A-Akatsuki...? NO!" Gaara shouted, his gourd forming. Even with the loss of Shukaku, he had about as much control over sand as he did in his fight with Kimimaro. "IF THAT'S THE CASE, THEN WE NEED TO GET OVER THERE, NOW!!" He added, running out of the building. He dashed over to a building with an alarm system, and he triggered it, shouting "All army troops get ready to attack" into the microphone that was there along with it.

Temari yawned, and left her room to go to the center of the village. "Gaara, what are you whining about now...?" She asked, with a frown. Gaara had assembled the army for some odd stuff before, like the time a tiny village in the fire country was attacked.

"KONOHA HAS BEEN ATTACKED! WE NEED TO GO OVER THERE AND HELP THEM!" Gaara annouced, making a platform of sand.

(Back in the jail)

Naruto hopped out of his bed, and sighed. "So...we're stuck. Shikamaru, you're the genious, any ideas of how to get out of here?"

Shikamaru shook his head. "All of my ideas involve using chakra. It's check, but not checkmate right now."

Neji rolled his eyes. "Oh geez, you and your stupid game..."

Naruto opened his mouth to say something, but he froze in place. His eyes went white, and all he could see around him was the sewers leading to the Kyuubi. Great, what's going on now? He thought, walking forward in his mind to the Kyuubi's chamber. He shuddered as he saw a figure in the room in front of the chamber.

"Ah, Naruto Uzumaki." The figure said, smiling.

"Uchiha Itachi...! What the heck are you doing here?!"

"Well, when I said I'd share my powers with you, that also meant I'd seal myself in you when I died." Itachi said. "Look, I'm not here to hurt you- I'm here to help. I know a way to get you out of your chakra device, and it's rather obvious when you think about it."

"...How do I know I can trust you...?" Naruto asked, eyes thinning.

"Do you think you're the only one who wants Konoha back to it's former glory? I hate to think that my village is destroyed right now, and it's my belief that only you...can stop Sasuke." Itachi said closing his eyes.

"...Okay, I'm listening."

In Konoha, Sasuke sat in a large room, thinking. After destroying Konoha, his mind was changed. He know thought himself the same as Pein- he thought himself as a god.

So, I managed to destroy this wretched village. But now what? I can't have that weird circle-eyed god-imitation walking around and ruining my rein as god... I guess I'll start at the bottom of Akatsuki and work my way up. I'll have Suigetsu kill Kisame, and go from there...Though, Suigetsu will probably be killed afterwords...It doesn't matter. Less competition. It all leads up to Pein, and eventually Madara. He thought, a twisted grin across his face. He left the room, and turned to go down a hall, not noticing a pair of Rinnegan eyes watching him the whole time.

Pein sighed- he opposed Sasuke and his team of weirdos joining Akatsuki from the start- and now he knew that Sasuke was planning...something. But what? Uchiha...what are you thinking...? He wondered, following the Uchiha.

"Look, I know you're following me." Sasuke said, turning around.

"..." Pein frowned, and, in the blink of an eye, tackled Sasuke to the ground. "LOOK, KID! I DON'T KNOW WHAT YOU'RE THINKING, BUT IF YOU OR ANY OF YOUR LITTLE PALS EVEN TOUCH ONE OF THE AKATSUKI MEMBERS, YOU'RE DEAD!"

"As if you could actually kill a god." Sasuke said.

"Enough, both of you." Madara said, having just arrived. "Pein, get off of Sasuke." He added, with a sigh.

"...Fine." Pein muttered, getting up. He turned, and frowned as a sword entered his chest. "...?!"

I suppose I'll just start with him... Sasuke thought, activating his sharingon.

Pein grinned, and took the sword out, as his injuries healed. "So, that's your plan, eh? Please." He said, spinning to face Sasuke. "Hell has a spot reserved for those who oppose God." He added, kicking Sasuke into the wall, and then disapeering.

(Back in Naruto's mind)

"So, Itachi, how do I get out of the chakra thing?"

"Simple- I'll make it so that the Kyuubi's chakra enters the device- chakra overload. The device will break, you'll be able to use chakra, and you can just use the Kyuubi's chakra to break the rest of the devices. At least, that's my plan."

"What, do you not think it'll work?"

"Mmm, I'm 50% sure it WILL work. 25% sure nothing will happen, and 25% sure that it'll explode with such force that all of you die."

"...Let's hope it's that first one."

"...Yeah."

[SukiAmaya]

Ooh Nice can't wait to see what's next

[Suiko]

i just finished reading, and gotta say, you have an intresting way of viewing naruto. but most of it seems logical exept gaara and pein seem a bit out of character.

[PeinxKonan]

Originally Posted by Suiko

i just finished reading, and gotta say, you have an intresting way of viewing naruto. but most of it seems logical exept gaara and pein seem a bit out of character.

Gaara is merely because he's worried out of his mind about Naruto. and pein, well, i don't have a full grasp on his personality.

[Kithune]

Anywayz, GOOD fanfic, really good. Keep on doing it. I still wanna see Naruto releasing his kyuubi chakra to break free from that device, or the explosion that it will make. hehe, BOOM!.

[Ripuli]

That was good!
Keep em coming